Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." - Carl Sandburg

Monday, June 20, 2011

brian's 4 poem



FIRE
                                    
Frightening fire fell freely
Firefighters feel fear
Falling flames fight the firefighters
Finally the flames fizzle 





 Math

by: Brian Kim
I like math 
Math is cool
Math is fun
I like math class in school
I like math in Korea too
Let's play a math game
Me and… You!
We can try this one


Tony


by:brian KIm

tony is my brother
Tony likes art
last night he drew a knight
Tony likes cartoons
His favorite cartoons is Avatar
He likes snacks
His favorite snack is dry noodle
He likes computers
I play soccer with my brother


soccer
by:Brian Kim
I walked down the hall.
I saw a soccer ball! 
I wanted to play
But i had to sit through the school day.
When the bell rang
My heart sang
But then i had homework.
I think my day is work work work
I think soccer has to wait 
I can't play this late

The end



3 comments:

  1. That problem isn't math!!
    It is physic question.
    It is something about volume.

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  2. But you need Math to solve physics questions!!! I love your poetry Brian!!!

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  3. Thank you Mrs.Burke
    Have a nice summer

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